small corrections to Bazaar-NG Tutorial

[Ludo]

On 2/6/06, James Blackwell <jblack at merconline.com> wrote:
> I, James David Blackwell, of sound mind and poor speling, hereby give Ludo
> both the right and reponsibility to report or fix all spelling mistakes
> within in documentation.  Well, unless you're a grey vs. gray sort.

I'm sorry, I didn't know it was a Wiki (thanks Jan for pointing that
out & the URI!), I wouldn't have bothered the list if I knew. I'll
look into fixing it this evening or tomorrow (unless someone has
already gotten around doing it by now).


> > 5) The part "Message from an editor" contains this sentence: "The
> > editor to run is controlled by your $EDITOR environment variable or
> > (Post Bazaar-NG 0.6) email setting in ."
> > email setting in what? (Also, to be 100% correct, it should be
> > "e-mail" (i.e. with a dash ;-)), but that's nitpicking heh.)
>
> If you think "e-mail" helps with readibility...

Not sure about the readibility... however, Jan's reason is certainly a
good one to leave it like that. Didn't know about the configuration
file's naming scheme.
But anyway, the email vs e-mail part was just an extra, my main point
was that the sentence is unfinished (i.e. it ends with " setting in
."). I suppose that it should be something like "or (Post Bazaar-NG
0.6) the email setting in Bazaar's configuration file.".

Thanks for the comments, James & Jan.
Ludo