http://bazaar-vcs.org/BzrFeatures - improving page

[Ian Clatworthy]

Jari Aalto wrote:

> I've finished the modifications in big part. Please proof read the text
> as it certainly contains mistakes in grammar.

Thanks Jari.

I've made another round of improvements based on your text. I ended up
moving the 'unique features' out of the summary into the details section
because the two section were looking the same size before then. I also
expanded the description of best practices we encourage.

Do this look all ok to you now?

Ian C.