nit picking bzr-migration-docs

[Stephen J. Turnbull]

Matthew D. Fuller writes:
 > On Sat, Oct 24, 2009 at 01:42:10PM +1100 I heard the voice of
 > Algis Kabaila, and lo! it spake thus:

 > > (That's a natural consequence of using a best practice Bazaar directly 
 > > encourages called *feature branching*.) 
 > > 
 > > Perhaps that's because my native language is not English, but to me
 > > the above  sentence just does not make sense

It's parseable, but rather awkward IMHO.

 > Perhaps shuffling it around to an object and elaboration, rather than
 > a very long object, e.g. "That's a natural consequence of using
 > *feature branching*, a best practice Bazaar directly encourages".

+1

 > I also prefer "This is" to "That's", but that may be an overall tonal
 > issue rather than a local wording one.

I agree with both points (not having read the sentence in situ :).