[Bug 48525] Re: Problems with Dapper Release Notes for Kubuntu
Jonathan Jesse
jjesse at iserv.net
Tue Jun 6 17:48:42 UTC 2006
Ran the release notes that are currently in svn through spell check and
updated the document. Copied that over from trunk to branches/dapper.
Waiting on rewriting the "style" to make it seem more professional.
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- The release notes (help:/kubuntu/krelease-notes/index.html) are full of typos ("Recomendations", "regulary", "preditctably", "Ubuquity", "seperate", etc.), read unprofessionally ("Wahoo a sweet new installer is available ...!!!!", "FREE of charge!!!!", etc.), and appear to be confused in other ways (a paragraph for "a sweet new installer" that talks about features in Breezy, and then a separate paragraph for Ubiquity which is the actual new installer). ColinWatson would like this to be reviewed by a good copy-editor and fixed in dapper-updates.
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- Working on fixing the ReleaseNotes both for style and
- spelling/grammer. Please see JonathanJesse for more information on this.
+ The release notes (help:/kubuntu/krelease-notes/index.html) are full of typos ("Recomendations", "regulary", "preditctably", "Ubuquity", "seperate", etc.), read unprofessionally ("Wahoo a sweet new installer is available ...!!!!", "FREE of charge!!!!", etc.), and appear to be confused in other ways (a paragraph for "a sweet new installer" that talks about features in Breezy, and then a separate paragraph for Ubiquity which is the actual new installer). ColinWatson would like this to be reviewed by a good copy-editor and fixed in dapper-updates.
+ Working on fixing the ReleaseNotes both for style and spelling/grammer. Please see JonathanJesse for more information on this.
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Problems with Dapper Release Notes for Kubuntu
https://launchpad.net/bugs/48525
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