[Ubuntu-be] nieuwe flyer voor beurzen - a few comments

[jean7491]

Hi to all,

Indeed this is a very nice folder ! but not suited for individual printers.

A few personal comments to improve the content :

- Nice background : above the word "AND" appears as a link between "FREE
..." and "UNLEASH ...". It should be translated as the titles "FREE YOUR
MIND" and "UNLEASH YOUR PC"  in Dutch.

- First paragraph, as introduction,  should be more visible (different
police, character, italic or bold) compared with the following text.

- Text "Bovenal: ubuntu is vrij!" should be followed by "Vrij te
kopieren, gebruiken, verdelen en verbeteren!" and more visible.

- Last paragraph : the sentence "Meer weten ..." lseems to me ending
with "... zal maken" followed by a dot.

- "Surf" sounds me better than "Surft"

- The sentence "kortom: free your mind!" (to be translated) is related
to the whole message, and not with "Meer weten: ...  zal maken." :
should be separated from the previous sentence.

Regards

Jean

Steven Van Landeghem a écrit :
> mea cupla! verkeerde link, dit is de juiste:
> https://wiki.ubuntu.com/BelgianTeam/ComputerFairs?action=AttachFile&do=get&target=ubuntu.flyer.jpg
> <https://wiki.ubuntu.com/BelgianTeam/ComputerFairs?action=AttachFile&do=get&target=ubuntu.flyer.jpg>
>
> -------- Forwarded Message --------
> *From*: Steven Van Landeghem <steven.vanlandeghem op gmail.com
> <mailto:Steven%20Van%20Landeghem%20%3csteven.vanlandeghem op gmail.com%3e>>
> *To*: ubuntu-be op lists.ubuntu.com <mailto:ubuntu-be op lists.ubuntu.com>
> *Subject*: nieuwe flyer voor beurzen
> *Date*: Sat, 16 May 2009 12:42:02 +0200
>
> Beste mensheid,
>
> Ik ben nieuw op launchpad en de mailing list en heb meteen een nieuwe
> flyer ontworpen om eventueel te gebruiken op beurzen e.d. Je vindt hem
> in de wiki. Feedback is welkom!
>
> Groetjes,
>