proofreading was( Re: Announcing the Release Candidate for Ubuntu 6.10 )

[Lloyd D Budd]

Hi ubuntu-doc list,

I sent the email below about a week ago to Toilef hoping to find out
how better to collaborate. I have not yet heard back. Maybe someone
else has some suggestions for me?

Thank you,
Lloyd


---------- Forwarded message ----------
From: Lloyd D Budd <foolswisdom at gmail.com>
Date: Oct 30, 2006 2:18 PM
Subject: proofreading was( Re: Announcing the Release Candidate for
Ubuntu 6.10 )
To: tfheen at ubuntu.com


On 10/19/06, Lloyd D Budd <foolswisdom at gmail.com> wrote:
> On 10/19/06, Tollef Fog Heen <tfheen at ubuntu.com> wrote:
> > Before installing or upgrading to "Edgy Eft" make sure to read
> > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/EdgyReleaseNotes
>
> Looking great!
>
> Capitalization of "Open Source Community", "Release Candidate" ?
>
> "as faster system boot up times" should be just "as faster system boot
> up"; times is redundant, same for the next point about GNOME,
>
> Crash Reports still needs a link to more information and/or that GNOME
> applications do not use crash reporter.
>
> Aside, I am annoyed Tomboy is being promoted when it has some
> awkwardness to it which has not received feedback to
> https://launchpad.net/distros/ubuntu/+source/tomboy/+bug/64102
> https://launchpad.net/distros/ubuntu/+source/tomboy/+bug/61756

Hi Tollef,

Did you see my feedback above? I was a little disappointed that none
of my suggestions were used, or more importantly that no one replied.