Request for proofreading of release announcement mail

[Matt Zimmerman]

On Wed, Oct 17, 2007 at 05:09:02PM -0700, Steve Langasek wrote:
> Hi Vadim,
> 
> On Wed, Oct 17, 2007 at 08:06:14AM -0400, Vadim Peretokin wrote:
> > This might somewhat silly, but I had a few people ask me "Which version of
> > Ubuntu do I get?", them all being on laptops. Could it say - "Ubuntu is a
> > Linux distribution for your desktop, laptop or server" - since that doesn't
> > specify the versions of Ubuntu explicitly, it should be fine.
> 
> Doesn't sound silly to me at all, but I'd like Matt's opinion before making
> this change.  Of course the current meaning of "desktop" here is "computers
> running a desktop environment" rather than "desktop computers", so while
> confusing I want to be sure this change in meaning is ok before committing.

I have no problem with it.

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 - mdz