Playbook One

[Dougie Richardson]

Hi Dean,

2009/4/24 Dean Sas <dean at deansas.org>:
> Had a quick look at this, nice work. Here are some initial thoughts:
> * Typo - the opening paragraph should pluralise place

Changed.

> * You link to the derivative bug pages but don't mention they have
> different branches

I'm not sure about how to handle this because the focus is usually for
the next release. I might mention that them though.

> * "and there is a guide to the various tags available online", could
> that be linked?

Yes, I got distracted when I was looking for the DocBook link on the Wiki.

> * Is it worth pointing out that you can view your changes in the help
> viewer via yelp `pwd`/internet.xml ?

Of course! I do it when I'm writing - don't know why I missed that.
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Regards,

Dougie Richardson
http://www.lynxworks.eu/
dougierichardson at ubuntu.com