Technical Review of: Ubuntu Documentation > Ubuntu 9.04 > Printing, Faxing and Scanning
Oliver Parsons
oliver.j.a.parsons at googlemail.com
Fri Jun 12 15:17:52 UTC 2009
Received this email from Phil Bull:*
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Would you be interested in doing a technical review of the Printing,
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* Faxing and Scanning system documentation [1]?
Thanks,
Phil
[1] - https://help.ubuntu.com/9.04/printing/C/index.html
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Phil Bull
https://launchpad.net/people/philbull
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So, completed my first technical review for an ubuntu 9.04 doc. My thoughts:
1. Under local printing - "Most printers will automatically be
detected *an*configured" - the "an" should be "and".
2. Under faxing - "It also has an interface to provide a “virtual printer”
for sending faxes from word processors and similar programs,
*can*automatically email a received fax to a designated user, and can
automatically print a received fax." - I suggest that the second "can" be
replaced with "as well as" or something similar, to allow easier reading of
sentence.
Finally, I believe that I posted this on Launchpad as a bug:
https://bugs.launchpad.net/ubuntu/+source/ubuntu-docs/+bug/386376.
Not sure on how to use Launchpad - so I hope that I have posted correctly!
Hope this contribution has helped. Please feel free to email me.
Thanks.
Oliver Parsons.
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