request for review of Ubuntu 9.04 beta release announcement

[Matt Zimmerman]

On Wed, Mar 25, 2009 at 06:59:30PM -0700, Steve Langasek wrote:
> Hi all,
> 
> Here is a draft for the Ubuntu 9.04 beta email announcement:
> 
>   https://wiki.ubuntu.com/JauntyJackalope/BetaAnnouncement
> 
> Please review and advise me of any problems.

s/every-day/everyday/

I think "cloud environments" is a bit vague; can we use a better term?  The
sentence as a whole is a bit awkward as well.  How about the more direct:

"Ubuntu 9.04 Server Edition makes it easy to experiment with cloud computing
using Eucalyptus on your own servers.  Dynamically create new virtual
machines on demand, ...other things you can do with it..."

(remember, this is in universe as a tech preview, not a first-class feature
yet)

-- 
 - mdz