Patch for internet/C/connecting.xml

[Glen Sawtell]

Hi All,

I am looking to contribute to the Ubuntu documentation so I dove into
the deep end and have made a small patch where I noticed a couple of
issues in the Jaunty branch. Please let me know if this is any good or
not. There is still a problem with this page (<xref linkend="modem"/>)
that goes nowhere but I did not know what it was linking to so I could
not fix it. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Regards,
Glen.


# Begin patch
=== modified file 'internet/C/connecting.xml'
--- internet/C/connecting.xml	2009-03-23 22:46:11 +0000
+++ internet/C/connecting.xml	2009-05-20 05:32:38 +0000
@@ -14,13 +14,13 @@
 <?yelp:chunk-depth 4?>
 <chapter id="connecting" status="review">
 	<title>Connecting</title>
-	<para>NetworkManager manages wired, wireless, mobile broadband, vpn
and dsl connections. It does not
+	<para>NetworkManager manages wired, wireless, mobile broadband, VPN
and DSL connections. It does not
 	currently support dialup modem connections but there is help
available in <xref linkend="modem"/>.</para>
 	
 	<sect1 id="connecting-wired" status="review">
 		<title>Wired (LAN)</title>
-		<para>DHCP connections (where settings are concfigured by your
router) are automatically configured.
-		Wired network connections are selected as default when connected.</para>
+		<para>DHCP connections (where settings are given by your router)
are automatically configured.
+		Wired network connections are selected as the default connection
when they are present.</para>
 		<sect2 id="connecting-wired-dhcp" status="review">
 			<title>DHCP Connections</title>
 			<para>Most routers use DHCP to allocate IP addresses.</para>
@@ -31,15 +31,15 @@
 			</orderedlist>
 		</sect2>
 		<sect2 id="connecting-wired-manual" status="review">
-			<title>Static Connections</title>
-			<para>If you don't use DHCP then you can configure a static
connection.</para>
+			<title>Static IP Connections</title>
+			<para>If you don't use DHCP then you can configure a static IP
connection.</para>
 			<orderedlist>
 				<listitem><para>Right click the NetworkManager icon in the system
notification area.</para></listitem>
 				<listitem><para>Click <guilabel>Edit
Connections</guilabel>.</para></listitem>
 				<listitem><para>Click the <guilabel>Wired</guilabel> tab.</para></listitem>
 				<listitem><para>Select the connection and click
<guibutton>Edit</guibutton>.</para></listitem>
 				<listitem><para>Click the <guilabel>IPv4</guilabel> tab.</para></listitem>
-				<listitem><para>Choose <guilabel>Manual</guilabel> from the
<guilabel>Method</guilabel> drop down.</para></listitem>
+				<listitem><para>Choose <guilabel>Manual</guilabel> from the
<guilabel>Method</guilabel> drop down box.</para></listitem>
 				<listitem><para>Enter your details and click
<guibutton>OK</guibutton>.</para></listitem>
 				<listitem><para>Click <guibutton>Close</guibutton>.</para></listitem>
 			</orderedlist>