request for review of Ubuntu 9.10 release candidate announcement

[Kyle Nitzsche]

Minor usage point on the following:

"The Ubuntu 9.10 family of variants, Kubuntu, Xubuntu, Edubuntu, Ubuntu 
Studio, and Mythbuntu, also reach RC status today."

A list is not usually preceded by a comma. Consider a colon or 
parentheses, as in:
"The Ubuntu 9.10 family of variants also reach RC status today: Kubuntu, 
Xubuntu, Edubuntu, Ubuntu Studio, and Mythbuntu."

Or:
"The Ubuntu 9.10 family of variants (Kubuntu, Xubuntu, Edubuntu, Ubuntu 
Studio, and Mythbuntu) also reach RC status today."

Cheers
Kyle



Steve Langasek wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> Here is the draft for the Ubuntu 9.10 release candidate announcement:
>
>   https://wiki.ubuntu.com/KarmicKoala/RCAnnouncement
>
> Please review and advise me of any corrections that should be made.
>
> Thanks,
>