CHANGELOG: User Documentation Main Page: Using the terminal

[Tom Davies]

Hi :)
I think i did have a look and it all looked fine to me.  I only notice if there 
is an obvious problem, such as spam, but the page does look nice now as far as i 
remember.  It is good when people do edit and think about what they are doing.  

Good work :)
Thanks and regards from
Tom :)




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From: Manjul Apratim <manjul.apratim at gmail.com>
To: ubuntu-doc at lists.ubuntu.com
Sent: Thu, 18 August, 2011 21:28:07
Subject: Re: CHANGELOG: User Documentation Main Page: Using the terminal

Hi All,

After a few more inputs from Chris, I edited further the "Terminal" section - I 
mentioned, for one, how to open a new terminal, since the new user may not know 
how to open a terminal in the first place, and then reworded the questions in 
the "forum" scenario, where a veteran asks the new user for information. I did 
not expressly state that the user need not understand the outputs of the 
commands they have entered - since if they gradually begin to do so, they shall 
be helping themselves - but I did mention that having provided all the relevant 
pieces of information, the veteran would be able to help them out instantly.

I also changed the query "lspci | grep Wireless" to "lspci | grep Network", 
since the word "Wireless" does not always figure in the output of lspci (as I 
discovered on my other laptop), while the word "Network" universally does.

Again, any suggestions are more than appreciated!

Regards

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Manjul Apratim
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