Please, could you give your opinion on these documentation styles?

[Alberto Salvia Novella]

Hello,

Look, I'm trying to improve the quality on how Ubuntu documentation is 
written to make it better to non-technical users. It happens that 
there's an aspect right now that is unclear if it good or not, so I was 
wondering if you could give your opinion on that.

In particular I would like to know which one do you prefer, why, and 
what would you change from that chosen one.

But remember having both versions at view at the same time on your 
screen, or the experiment wouldn't be valid. This means you'll need a 
desktop with a wide screen or two screens.

Here you have the pages:
  - 
<https://wiki.ubuntu.com/One%20Hundred%20Papercuts/Work-flow/Triage/Fixable>
  - 
<https://wiki.ubuntu.com/One%20Hundred%20Papercuts/Work-flow/Triage/Workable>

Thanks you.


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