Introduction, First Wiki Edit

[Gunnar Hjalmarsson]

Hi Dave,

On 2017-08-18 00:30, Dave Kokandy wrote:
> Anyway, one of the things the getting started guide said was to
> discuss your contributions on the docteam mailing list,

Hmm.. Do you have a URL to that guide?

In general, for minor uncontroversial fixes, there should be no need to 
request reviews IMO. For major changes, or changes of the most high 
profile pages, discussing them at e.g. this list is however recommended.

> This lowhanging page - https://help.ubuntu.com/community/Nano - had
> three tags on it, Style, Unsupported, and NeedsUpdating. I removed
> many of the obviously obsolete references and brought some of the
> content to be more in accordance with the WritingGuide, but the bulk
> of the article still seemed to be accurate so I left it mostly
> untouched.
> 
> So I wonder:
> 
> - Based on these changes, was I right to remove the tags or do you
> think additional revision was required?

If you addressed the issues which motivated the tags, it was indeed 
right to remove them.

> - Would you have updated the screenshot? And if so, would you use
> Unity since that is the current default DE, or would it be good to
> use GNOME for the future?

I might not have updated it, but only because I'm lazy. ;) If you do it, 
I agree it's a good idea to use GNOME going forward.

> - Do you have any other feedback on this first attempt?

I agree with Nio that the page looks good now.

Thank you very much for your contribution!

> Thanks for your time and consideration, and if anyone else is working
> on the wiki actively please let me know what the current major goals
> are, otherwise I'll start by trying to fix the tagged pages.

Fixing tagged pages is one of the most important things you can do to 
help improve the community help wiki.

-- 
Gunnar Hjalmarsson
https://launchpad.net/~gunnarhj