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[Simon Ruiz]

Sorry about not getting to the wiki page yesterday.

I just attacked it; it felt like most of that introductory paragraph was talking a lot and saying little. Anyhow, I've severely shortened it.

I've also broken off the advocacy bit into it's own paragraph as I feel that's not really what people who we are introducing ourselves to will be interested in. I also don't feel it's important to say that we work for advocacy on the advocacy material we're passing out, for example :-) so my feeling is that we should use the first paragraph from the introduction on the bookmarks, but not the (new) second paragraph.

If you've got any feedback or editorial-type comments on the page, let me have it!

Hope this finds you all having a great weekend.

Also, a reminder that our next IRC meeting is this coming Wednesday evening at 8pm where we will be, among other things, celebrating our grand success at the LinuxFest earlier in the day.

Take care!

Simón