Hardy Heron Release Banner

[George Brooke]

On Fri, 18 Apr 2008 21:39:12 -0400
jmak <jozmak at gmail.com> wrote:

> On Fri, Apr 18, 2008 at 3:49 PM, George Brooke
> <solar.george at googlemail.com> wrote:
> > On Thu, 17 Apr 2008 11:00:10 +0530
> >
> > "Ashok Gautham" <scriptdevil at gmail.com> wrote:
> >
> >
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> >  While I like the 'banners' that you have made they seem to me to be
> >  more posters so I have made an alternative which would fit in the
> > same space as the gutsy banner which started this.
> >  http://solar-george.selfip.org:1000/heron.png
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> >  solar.george
> >
> 
> Hi George,
> 
> The banner is not bad; here are a few suggestions how you can improve
> it. "Hardy Heron 8.04" is a logical unit that has to be expressed
> visually as well. Group them tightly. The "has landed" less important
> and this fact also has to be expressed visually; perhaps with a
> smaller and different typefaces; you can also emphasize this by
> separating off from the center of interest. Something like the
> following sketch.
> 
> http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/9091/hardyreleasekz6.png
> 
> jmak
> 

Hi,

How about,
http://solar-george.selfip.org:1000/heron-2.png

solar.george